Kyron Beaton Journalism Student Kwantlen Polytechnic University 12666 72nd Avenue Surrey, B.C. V7M 3H9 October 28, 2021 Jacqualine Griggs Kamloops Fire Center B.C. Wildfire Services Airport Rd. Kamloops, B.C. V2B 7X2 Dear Ms. Griggs, Under the Freedom of Information Act, I would like to request the following: In electronic database format, from the years 2000 to 2021, within Zones K2 through K7, a raw count of suspicious fire reports that escalated to a police investigation. I request that the data collected is put into an electronic worksheet format (i.e.: .xmlx, .cml, .csv). The reason for this is so that I am able to more easily work with the raw data for my research. Please refer to my email and phone number below for further contact. Thank you for your time in reading this email, and I look forward to hearing back from you. Sincerely, Kyron Beaton 778-835-3271 kyronbeaton@gmail.com FOI Explanation: According to my raw data I collected from my data analysis class, there were 2...
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Kyron, your stand ups clearly address the issue and they are well rehearsed. Your interview subjects are being heard loud and clear, and they give detailed thoughts on the problem. One area of criticism is that there was some camera shake in one of your interviews.
ReplyDeleteYou do a good job of detailing your problem and your interview subjects seem knowledgeable. Although, I would have liked your voice not to be heard during the interviews. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job as video was perfectly made: good video quality, perfect shots and good standup. Unlikely, during second video, I was unable to listen properly due to some background noises.
ReplyDeleteI liked how your interviews and stand ups clearly described the problem, as the interviews were helpful in adding more context to the ongoing issue. I do think more variety of cutaway shots would have been helpful, but overall good work!
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